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life in you
by Rati Saxena
whenever mines
pass under my foot's sole
they start exploding
one by one-
a beautiful dream 
comes and sits on your eyebrows
all my blasts
take wing in the sky, as clouds

whenever
my grip with friendship loosens   
you take a small path, and
walk smiling...
the roots of my faith
get green

when
all the effort to
untighten the knots of memory
gets stuck somewhere
you start rolling on sand
like a lovely sparrow-
my wings buzz in the vilambit tal

you are keeping your foot 
from where my world falls down
then also...
I see my life in you
		

 
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