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View
by Dimas Melchor
I watched you to see what your view was
I watched a view of no sunset
These eyes have been flowing forever
When is forever not enough?

We both wondered what the other was thinking
We didn't have to look very far
My bottom lip is bleeding
The air I breathe is numb

This moment will repeat again
While we are here, we're not the same
Your picture remains in my wallet
While you threw mine away...

The cost of changing is too much
The thought is too much to bear
You told me you've already searched there
Then why am I still here?

Fate plays its game
When was the last time you whispered my name?
Fate plays its game
Why hasn't my love faded away??
		

 
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