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embracing the present
by marcuss hall
i watch you sleep,
  you are still,
  angel on a cloud in heaven at rest,
this is how i love you,
this is how we are.

i love our times together-
  almost a year
  and going strong.

remember our times-
  touches and stares.
we walk down lanes in our heads,
we dance around like children,
we begin to laugh... 
  a tear falls from my eye.

i love you, god, i love you!

i hope this never dies-
i won't let it fade,
i won't let it fade.

turn out the lights 
and up the heat;
we hold one another and our eyes meet.
whisper one more time 
and tell me so
of how you will never let go.
i won't let it fade...
		

 
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