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Untouchable
by B J N
Unknown wonders and unknown thoughts
Things left unturned and undiscovered spots

Light and Bright; Dark and Dim
Burning inside, deep within

Close, yet, distant- I feel with you 
It's unbearable, this pain I feel

I close my eyes hoping it will pass 
This spell you have cast

Upon my Heart, upon my Soul
Will it stay, or will it go?

I cannot say for things unknown 
Or for this Heart, yet un-shown

Close to you, yes I fear
Piece by piece you leave me here.
		

 
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