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A Short Time
by Judy Auclair
In the Heaven's above...
   shine
   many stars.
Each one tries...
   to outshine
   the other.
And they are all...
   so beautiful.

But...
   every once
   in a while...
There is one star...
   that is
   burning
   so bright
That no one
   can help
   but to look
   at its beauty.

But...
   there is sadness...
   to this 
   beautiful
   bright star.
For, the only reason 
   it can
   burn so bright,
Is because
   it only burns
   for a short 
   time.

But...
   in this short time...
You...
   yes, you...
Have loved me...
   and made me
   burn bright!

 
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