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Your Ex
by Elizabeth Leigh Friend
She will always be the one
Whom I strive to become.
She stole your first embrace.
Her hands were the first to caress your face.
The memories she left with you 
Will in your heart always hold true.
She will always be the first.
In my eyes she's the worst.
How do I even compare
To a girl who once had your every care?
Once you love someone is the feeling ever really lost?
No, it's not; those feelings can't simply away be tossed.
So in your heart she'll always be
Dwelling there to intimidate me.
		

 
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