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A Child's Prayer by Amelia Jeane Adkins

  You gave me life,
yet, I am a part of you.
Now I see you walk away,
digusted at the way I am.

  I see you give up on
our happiness.  I see you 
walking out on me again,
thinking to myself, What
did I do to make her leave?

  Was it me?  Or was it you?
You're the one who gave up on 
our family!  I still dream
of our family being together, 
and you being happy and carefree.
And in that dream you're with me again.



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