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I Want to impress you with the real me
by Athena Antonia Menis
I Want to impress you with the real me
From the first day I saw you..
My heart had skipped a beat..
You turned around and you
Just swept me off my feet.

One thing I liked about you,
is that you didn't care how I looked that day...
I was wearing a white cloth on my head and 
I didn't know what you would say..

You said "i like your eyes" and I wanted to say more..
But just thinking of the age difference I couldn't say anymore..
I thought that u'd make fun of me when u found out I liked you..
Instead u were nice and you had a lot of respect too..

All your qualities made me like you a lot..
And I just want to show u wat I've got..
But you really don't know who I am..
So I really want to show you the real me..

I try to talk to you,
but every chance I get..
Someone comes along ..
And you just forget..

But I'm also worried..
Because I don't want to say anything that I'll regret.
I wanted to impress you..
But wat could I do..

Is there anything interesting I could talk about..
That you would find interesting too?
I Wanna impress you with the real me..
And make your heart be able to see
		

 
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