Poems Comments

Poem: You'd better love me
Please express your comments on this poem. For reference the poem is listed below the comment form.
If you care if the poet knows your name and/or if you want the poet to be able to contact you, please fill in the boxes below. Your e-mail address should contain the last part of the address such as: aol.com or hotmail.com etc.
Your Name:
Your Email:
Comments:

You'd better love me
by HYS
Eclipsed by your light,
My Bohemian heart
Hearkens your lips.
Kiss me to your heart!

Entwined in your universe,
My revolutionary world
Speaks your language.
Preach me to your hands!

Printed on your eyes,
My boundless prism
Cares about your senses.
Feel me to your toes!

Risen on your horizon,
My  all-vigilant Sun
Pours out on your skirts.
Expose me to your rivers!

 
Submitted Poems | Featured Poems | Classic Poems | Love Quotes
AskTheLoveMaster | Reflections | MostPopularPoem | PoetryTours
PoemsDirect | PoetryChat | Shopping Mall | Submit Your Poem
Advertising | Privacy Statement | Investment Opportunities