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One night
by Laurabelle
My heart is warm on this star filled night
no more thoughts
it's all calm
not a worry in sight

The flowers on the desk, they're looking at me
with a smile
and some love
and memories of he

I see rivers
I see hills
I see snow on the hillside

I feel laughter
I feel kisses
I feel no more need to hide

The candle, it's burning, amazing my eyes
with a flicker
it's still growing
burning away all their lies

For the moon, it's shining, hope it gives me
with some truth 
I feel loved
no more reason to flee

My thoughts not only see the rivers, they feel them too
takes me with it
through the valleys
yet not close enough to you...

I miss you
		

 
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